Five More Hints for Finding Chiasms

Hopefully you are finding these hints helpful. Here are five more thoughts that may assist you in your search efforts:

6. Writing in Your Bible

Do you write in your Bible? As I discover chiasms, I'll write the letters A and A′, or B and B′, etc. within the text at the beginning of each level. I like the ESV Study Bible because my pen does not bleed through. I use a Pilot P-500 Extra Fine pen and find that works very well for me. Caution: when selecting your next Bible, I don't recommend trying various translations with that pen at a Christian bookstore.

If I make a mistake, I write over the mistake or, if necessary, cross it out. It's a little messy but it works for me. I find that the analysis of literary structure is sometimes an iterative process; later discernments may help refine our initial understanding.

Genesis 9:12-17 with letters

Show Hint 7: Draw Connecting Lines

7. Draw Connecting Lines to Show Repeated Themes

I like to underline key words as I recognize patterns. Sometimes I will draw a straight line connecting the similar themes until I see the full pattern. I find that for some of the more difficult passages, this line drawing process is very helpful.

Genesis 9:12-17 with lines

Show Hint 8: The Charting Method

8. Take Advantage of the Charting Method

I like to use a charting method that to some may be cumbersome but it works very well for me. Please take a moment to compare this chart with the passage shown below the chart. Once you grasp this technique, this charting method should provide greater accuracy in your analysis of the many chiasms in the Bible.

Chiasm About Two Masters

A    No one can serve two masters.
B    Either he will hate the one
C    and love the other,
C′ or he will be devoted to the one
B′ and despise the other.
A′ You cannot serve both God and Money.
(Matt 6:24)

When reading this chart, the verses under First Presentation are to be read from top to bottom, while the verses under Inversion are to be read from bottom to top. Each repeated thought or phrase is called a Theme. There will always be two or more themes that, when combined together, are called a structure. Each theme is assigned a level. The conjugate pairs (e.g. B and B′) within each level are either similar to or opposite (antithetical) of each other.

In this chiasm, there are three levels, although there could be as few as two and as many as eight or ten or even higher. In this charting method, the center point of emphasis is always displayed in the bottom row of the chart. Also be aware that not all chiasms have a center point of emphasis; for example, many of the A-B-B′-A′ chiasms in Proverbs do not reveal their importance in this manner.

I strongly recommend that you use this charting method when there is any question about the structure. I have read many books about chiasms and only one author presents that method – I wish the others had. Also, I don't agree with every chiasm that is presented, so seeing this structure could help me understand it from their eyes. Just because you see a chiasm in print does not mean that it is correct.

Show Hint 9: Bible Translations

9. Which Bible Translations

Now please allow me to give a plug about which Bible translations I find to be best. I know this is sacred territory for some, so please allow me some grace.

My experience points to the more literal Bible translations as being the most effective in properly structuring a passage. The King James Version (KJV) has a reputation for being the most literal. Other fairly literal translations include the New King James Version (NKJV), New American Standard Bible (NASB), and the English Standard Version (ESV). To me, any reasonably literal translation works just fine.

For the purposes of evaluating structure, I find it can be very challenging to use the less literal translations such as the New Living Translation (NLT) and The Message. The New International Version (NIV) is somewhere between difficult and effective for me. The problems are that the order of words has often changed, key words may have been left out or altered, and phrases may have been replaced. The purpose of those translations is to convey the essence of the Scriptures, particularly for the newer believer. If you are here looking at possibly understanding literary structure in the Bible, chances are you are not that newer believer.

In my opinion, there is not a "best" English translation of the Bible for identification of the chiasms. Recalling the chiasm about humility, the King James Version renders this as:

A    Whosever shall exalt
B    himself
C    shall be abased;
C′ and he that shall humble
B′ himself
A′ shall be exalted.
(Matt 23:12 KJV)

In these verses, the KJV renders the C level as abased. I'm not sure if I would have found that chiasm if I had been using the KJV only; probably not.

A few years ago, I switched to the ESV Study Bible for my regular Bible reading. I find this fairly literal translation helps me uncover chiasms quite well; the footnotes also help with their identification.

I spend more time with my paper copies of the Bible than I do computer-based ones, but they should not be overlooked. The search engines in the computer software have proven to be very helpful to me. I have several on my desktop computer and my mobile devices; each has both strengths and weakness but all are powerful. I strongly encourage you to consider using one if you are not already doing so already.

Whether you use paper or a computer, having multiple translations available is a big plus. The ability to search by Strong's numbers is also very helpful. If you know any of the original languages, Greek, Hebrew or Aramaic, they surpass all of the English translation problems.

Show Hint 10: Where in the Bible

10. Know Where in the Bible to Find Chiasms

It is readily apparent to me that Hebrew people during Biblical times found it natural to think and talk in a chiastic manner. Their eyes and ears must have been trained to read and hear this type of structure and listen for the center point. That to me is phenomenal – it shows the genius that is behind the word of God as it was revealed to each writer.

The books of Matthew, Mark and John are full of chiasms and are an excellent beginning place for the discovery of chiasms. The writers of these three books were Jewish; when God inspired them to pen their portions of the Scripture, I believe they were already tuned into this approach.

Luke on the other hand was a Gentile – I don't think you will find many chiasms in Luke or Acts. It appears that when the Lord spoke to Luke, God's emphasis was more on the move of the Holy Spirit. The structures within the book of Luke are often with other patterns such as those described in Structure Variations.

The chiasms that I have found within the Epistles of Paul are more infrequent and rudimentary than some of the other portions of the New Testament. I have discovered some chiasms in Hebrews, James, 1 and 2 Peter; I suspect more are to be found there. And I have studied the parallelism in Revelation – the repetitions in that book seem to reveal other literary structures are primarily used there.

Those of us that have studied chiastic structures in the Old Testament generally concentrate on the historical books: Genesis through Esther. It seems they are abundantly woven throughout those narratives. I don't find many in the poetic or prophetic books of the Bible (Job through Malachi), but there are certainly exceptions such as Daniel and Zechariah.

I maintain a webpage entitled Relevant Books that may help you focus on one area or another.